Currently finishing the last chapter of my second edit. I am looking for help in regards to the following:
Characters - portrayal and believability
Dialogue - any areas where it loses momentum
Plot and pacing - is it flowing on full steam, or running flat
Scenes and story - are they too long, repetitive, gripping, about right
I'd also love to know whether the story grabs you, ie, how does it make you feel.
Need good honest opinions where you might think it could be going wrong. But, I'm not against receiving the odd one or two 'loves' either.
I'm willing to return the favour but only a chapter at a time, as I'm also working on other projects as well (MS only as I can't edit PDF files, sorry).
Look forward to hearing from you.